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Tuesday, 2 February 2016

@Phil Script to Screen Draft Script 2 (Dialogue)

Taking the advice from my previous draft , I kept the dialogue more short and snappy to create more tension. In this draft I left out the camera shots and other features which I will be keeping the same as in my first draft.

However, one thing I am unsure of is the ending line from the Property Developer. I haven`t included it in this draft but I`m struggling to think of a closing line when the sculpture decends. I know I want the closing line to pack a punch and make it seem as if theres a game between him and the detective , similar to cat and mouse. If anyone has any suggestions that`d be great.

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