tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2573688940497704894.post7618844654367661263..comments2023-04-29T05:06:28.077-07:00Comments on Sarah Hall / Computer Animation Arts UCA Rochester: Invisible Cities : Octavia Master Exterior ShotSarah Hallhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03109752339929644301noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2573688940497704894.post-45643806115573810932015-10-21T05:26:07.001-07:002015-10-21T05:26:07.001-07:00Hi Jackie! Thank you so much for the feedback , I ...Hi Jackie! Thank you so much for the feedback , I took it into account and updated my final painting in my newest post. I feel like moving the pillar in the foreground helped frame the image a lot better thanks! Although I wasn`t sure how to go about the scale ,so, I hope with the closer planks in the bridge that it helps. Sarah Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03109752339929644301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2573688940497704894.post-47183928969116159202015-10-21T00:19:08.691-07:002015-10-21T00:19:08.691-07:00Hi Sarah,
Love the colour palette :)
To me, the ...Hi Sarah,<br /><br />Love the colour palette :)<br /><br />To me, the scale feels off slightly... the bulk of the city feels more 'tree-house' like. I think it is maybe the rope (?) bridges; the gaps are enormous when compared to the buildings that they are leading to. Imagine what scale your inhabitants would be... they wouldn't make it past the first rung :) <br />Likewise, the 2 pillars in the foreground - they still feel very small. Maybe try pulling one pillar right back to the edge of the frame and making it more of a foreground element? And maybe try adjusting the tonal value of the middle and distant structures, to push them back a bit more... hope this helps! Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.com