tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2573688940497704894.post7524739611547378487..comments2023-04-29T05:06:28.077-07:00Comments on Sarah Hall / Computer Animation Arts UCA Rochester: Space Oddities : Edward Scissorhands Film ReviewSarah Hallhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03109752339929644301noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2573688940497704894.post-55202717012527961222015-11-18T23:03:52.755-08:002015-11-18T23:03:52.755-08:00Hi Sarah,
You have discussed some interesting ide...Hi Sarah,<br /><br />You have discussed some interesting ideas here :)<br />A couple of housekeeping points - Don't forget to include the year of the film the first time you mention it, and the film title should be in italics each time. Your reference after the quote should be in brackets.<br /><br />Be aware of the sources you are drawing from; you have included quotes here from 'Zanzie', which were taken from the comments section of a recognised film reviewer, Roger Ebert. You should really stick to the reviewer themselves, as the comments could have been made by any Tom, Dick or Harry, who may know nothing at all about film...<br />You should also include some more images - this review is crying out for an image of the castle overlooking the pastel town! It is a way of enhancing your discussion, and making it easier for your reader to visualise what you are writing about.Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.com