tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2573688940497704894.post34972767519895250..comments2023-04-29T05:06:28.077-07:00Comments on Sarah Hall / Computer Animation Arts UCA Rochester: @Phil Invisible Cities : Exterior Shot Compositions, Feedback?Sarah Hallhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03109752339929644301noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2573688940497704894.post-53576871320998472242015-10-19T14:50:43.474-07:002015-10-19T14:50:43.474-07:00Sorry I didn`t realize I didn`t respond to your me...Sorry I didn`t realize I didn`t respond to your message . Thank you for the advice , I posted my response to it and the advice really helped. I feel as if I`m getting somewhere :)Sarah Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03109752339929644301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2573688940497704894.post-30398533480218876202015-10-18T10:25:12.115-07:002015-10-18T10:25:12.115-07:00Is this advice on your master shot? If so, you nee...Is this advice on your master shot? If so, you need to open up the composition now to give us a sense of how this city is situated within its environment. I'd say too that it's still looking rather more like a big building as part of Octavia, as opposed to a glimpse of the full scale of the city - situating it in a landscape will certainly encourage you to think a little bigger still.tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.com