tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2573688940497704894.post291192876448647367..comments2023-04-29T05:06:28.077-07:00Comments on Sarah Hall / Computer Animation Arts UCA Rochester: What If ! Metropolis : Final Concept Art + Progress GIF (Feedback Please!)Sarah Hallhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03109752339929644301noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2573688940497704894.post-89417261897185850562015-11-18T22:31:02.629-08:002015-11-18T22:31:02.629-08:00I hopefully fixed that in the updated version :D I...I hopefully fixed that in the updated version :D I think it looks better and more populated now the tree has become architecture too now. Thanks! :)Sarah Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03109752339929644301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2573688940497704894.post-78647902713573436182015-11-18T22:30:39.396-08:002015-11-18T22:30:39.396-08:00I hopefully fixed that in the updated version :D I...I hopefully fixed that in the updated version :D I think it looks better and more populated now the tree has become architecture too now. Thanks! :)Sarah Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03109752339929644301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2573688940497704894.post-42109615377694681482015-11-18T05:18:10.375-08:002015-11-18T05:18:10.375-08:00What you've got going on here is nice but as P...What you've got going on here is nice but as Phil said it does seem a little empty :( <br /><br />http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-LCi8YLn-_KE/VkvqxbryWMI/AAAAAAAAAxs/R6PdfLYDw9M/s1600/black.jpg <br />What you had going on here was great, a few more buildings and maybe take the idea of turning the tree into architecture and you'll have a much busier city :D <br /><br />You can do it! :)Kayliegh Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15322674597429919012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2573688940497704894.post-47095082507362177772015-11-18T03:17:37.494-08:002015-11-18T03:17:37.494-08:00all I'd say is that it does seem a little '...all I'd say is that it does seem a little 'empty of buildings' - the main focus of your composition seems to be the brown 'trunk' of the giant tree? Maybe this 'brown trunk' should be architecture too?tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.com