tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2573688940497704894.post2037354493208036302..comments2023-04-29T05:06:28.077-07:00Comments on Sarah Hall / Computer Animation Arts UCA Rochester: Space Oddities : Black Narcissus (1947)Sarah Hallhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03109752339929644301noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2573688940497704894.post-72216612711603177872015-11-24T02:35:53.367-08:002015-11-24T02:35:53.367-08:00Almost there with the referencing after the quote ...Almost there with the referencing after the quote Sarah - both the name and the year should be inside the brackets, so (Ebert, 2010) for example.<br /><br />I still think you can be a bit more generous with your use of images... you could have used an image of the vast 'Himalayan' landscape when talking about the matte painting for example. You should also label and caption your images, so for example, 'Figure 2, Sister Ruth and Sister Clodagh '. This is then directly referenced in the Illustrations list, which should be separate from the bibliography.Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.com